Wednesday, January 4, 2012

fever 01/04/12

Before we went to winter break we read. The the doctor said. Mr Will Cook had the yellow fever. So they could not pass threw the town. So they went to the oak tree then he started to feel bad. Then they went to sleep and ended up in a house and they were helping them and figure out that he did not have yellow fever. Then they went to the house and she was not there and the house was broken.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    What happened next sounds exciting.

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  2. E. CavanaughJanuary 9, 2012 at 9:57 PM

    Tyler,
    Great number of sentences and enthusiasm! Next time check for sentence clarity and minor spelling errors. Good job!

    Thank you,
    Mr. Durbin

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